Tuesday, May 17, 2011

Joe's dream come true

Once upon time there was a guy named Joe. His favorite sport was

football. Joe’s dream was to be in the NFL. He played for his school team

called the Bull Dogs. He was the best person on the team. One day when he

was in high school a guy came up to him and said “You are really good”.

When Joe went home there was a letter in his mail box. Joe opened the

letter and it was from Robert. It said Joe can you play for me in college

I think you will be really good. So he played for Bull Dogs in college.

Then the NLF draft came and he was the 11th pick. He was going to the

Green Bay Packers and was so excited. After that year he got an award for

most improved player and player of the year. Joe’s dream came true! Joe

played for the Green Bay Packer for 12 years. His position is the quarterback.

When Joe was done playing football he go into the hall of fame. And was the

best quarterback in the world. When he was 40 years old he stopped playing

football. He was looking for job to give him something to do. But Joe

had a great idea. He had always wanted to make his own business when

he was a little kid like 5. So he went to college for 5 years. Now Joe

was 45. He had the money to make a business. So he built a business.

It was called the computer store. It sold all kinds of computers of all

sizes and colors. He made so much money. He had so much money

he gave it to the poor. And everyone like him. And that is how Joe's

life went.

1 comment:

  1. While this is a good topic for a short story, if you added more content, more events, and a conflict it would be much more interesting for people to read. You might want to consider adding on to what you have written in order to have a more fully developed story.

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