Sunday, January 29, 2012

Go Big Or Go Home

Authors Note: This is a retelling peace that shows what hapend in the book go big or go home.

It is about a teenager that finds a meteorite and shows his cousin that he found a meteorite and they’re going to a scientist to take a look at it. Is this going to be the most valuable meteorite in the world? This book is a great adventure packed book. Important event is when he and his cousin are in a boat and his backpack falls in the water with the meteorite in the backpack. What will happen next?

Thursday, January 26, 2012

In Rogers Eyes

Authors Note: This is a paragraph written from Roger's perspective to inform you on what he was feeling the other night.

Hi my name is Roger and I felt like a criminal last night around 11:00. I looked around the corner and saw a large woman Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones and I thought she was a perfect target. I garbed her purse with all my strength I tugged but lost my balance and fell to the ground. Then she kicked me in the right square of my blue-jeaned sitter. I felt ashamed of myself as she picked me up, all I wanted was a pair of shiny blue suede shoes I told her. She took me to her home and helped me wash my face. The door was wide open. I looked at the women then looked at the door and eventually went to the sink. I was ashamed of myself. She seemed nice and I wish I never had tried to take her purse. By the end of the night she gave me the 10 dollars I needed to buy the suede shoes I desperately wanted.

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

A Town Called Pineapple

Authors Note: This is a short story that I created to improve my score in word choice.

In this little town Pineapple in the state of Blueberry. There is a lot of audacity, kids and adults always encourage one another. This little town has lot of tourist attraction because there are a lot of mountains to climb and there are some spectacular bike trails. People always have an analogy because they keep comparing Pineapple to this town Pewaukee; they say they look the same. Tomorrow is a big day for Pineapple because it is the 4th of July. That is when they have a lot of tourists and they need to keep their town safe. There is this man that asphyxiated the man called Billy. Everyone in the town was shocked. And they had to hire more cops to keep the place safer. This made the economy be better because they had a lot of people but not enough jobs. This is the best day for all the people because they all have a job now.

What Will Happen In Chapter 2

Authors note this is a perdition for chapter 2 for Dead Man’s Path.

Michael Obi was a very intelligent guy. He graduated high school and went to collage. Michael Obi wife has this gorges garden. Kids are waking in the wonderful garden. Then Michael Obi puts up a fence so that the kids won’t ruin the wonderful garden.

Chapter two in the begging of the story Michael Obi put a fence in the garden. Michael was a hard-working man. I think that he will take the fence down because it is agents the native traditions to put a fence around there garden. And the minors will listen to Michael Obi.

Friday, January 13, 2012

Chapter Two

Authors note this is a perdition for chapter 2 for Dead Mans Path.

Michael Obi was a vary intelligent guy. He graduated high school and went to collage. His wife has this gorges garden. Kids are waking in the wonderful garden. Then Michael Obi puts up a fence so that the kids wont ruin the wonderful garden.


Chapter two in the begging of the story Michael Obi put a fence in the garden. Michael was a hard-working man. I think that he will take the fence down because it is agents the native traditions to put a fence around there garden. And the kids will listen to Michael Obi.