Friday, April 8, 2011

Basketball

Authors note: this picture shows my  favorite sport      
     

    
     I picked this picture because I like basketball. Basketball is my

favorite sport. I love to play basketball with my friends. Basketball is

so cool because you can watch the NBA dunk on the hoop. I find it

really cool to watch. That is why basketball is my favorite sport. My

favorite player on the Milwaukee Bucks is Brandon Jennings.

3 comments:

  1. nice job Zach I loved your sentence structure and your descriptive words are so precise. Also your picture is rambunctiously awesome. Your writing is so precise and perfect that even William Shakespeare will envy you. You are a true writing genius.

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  2. I like the action shot you chose to write about. You might want to edit this post so that the spacing is fixed up and looks better.

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